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The Commandments of Paradise
You will not crack. 
    You will not gleam 
    with want.  You will not tremble
    with uncertainty. 
    You will not zigzag. 
    You will not be sick 
    or crazy.  You will not 
    veil, lie, gild 
    or brood. Definitely no brooding 
    or holding back
    smiles or hitting 
    the walls. You will never 
    knock them down 
    with those dainty fists.
    You will not resist
    the names or jewels
    chosen just for you.
    You will not oscillate.
    You will not frown, fidget, 
    fester or fend
    for yourself.  You think 
    you can fend for yourself?
    You nothing, you mime,
    holding out a hand
  . . .  to strike?
Eve Responds to Cain's Confession
Are the feral
    blossom. 
    Are the devotion of the river
    fretted into rapids.
    Are the outskirts
    leaching the center
    of faith in itself;
    unbound book
    of your mother's lap.
    Are the tilt. 
    Are the winded
    fields. Are 
    the monastery of the far-flung, 
    the nether-den.
    Spawn of the shuddering harvest.
    Cornucopia of questions. 
    The unliftable anvil. Hammer 
    to the Word. Are 
    uncoaxable, the never 
    graced, the grimed 
    and gravel ground.
    Anti-ghost, anti-mirage,
    the fleshy scripture
    written in fists and hugs and blood 
    deep enough to drown a god
    who will never understand.
    Fronds blocking His light,
    ferment to His honey. 
    Are the eye-level gaze
    He'd love to blind into this beautiful 
    tumbling, spills scattered. 
    My one and only 
    unmoored umbilical.  
Pamela Garvey’s chapbook Fear (Finishing Line Press, 2008) was a finalist for the New Women’s Voices Competition. She has published poetry in journals such as Cimarron Review, Margie, The North American Review, Pleiades, RATTLE, Sonora Review, and Spoon River Poetry Review. contact
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